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The pen aches to touch the paper
To write about loneliness and longing
But the hand stops it, holds it back
For it knows not the pain of solitude
It has the company
Of another hand…

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  1. Date: 7/18/2011 6:46:00 AM
    usually loneliness is depicted in love related poems of separation and the like...but such a simple theory u have put is indeed marvellous n makes me think of simple uncomplicated explanation of so many things....

  1. Date: 7/18/2011 6:22:00 AM
    Congratulations Ali in the contest of Brian Strand "A Free Choice" Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/16/2011 4:12:00 PM
    Very beautiful and thought evoking, Afroze, Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie

  1. Date: 7/16/2011 2:04:00 PM
    yes, the isolation once shared will evaporate, Afroze

  1. Date: 7/16/2011 1:40:00 PM
    swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

  1. Date: 7/16/2011 1:39:00 PM
    brilliant! I love this! congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 7/16/2011 11:35:00 AM
    Congrats Afroze on your terrific third place win with this dynamic delight poetry luv..enjoy..

  1. Date: 7/16/2011 10:04:00 AM
    wow, VERY interesting one. LOVE it. Congrats.

  1. Date: 7/16/2011 7:50:00 AM
    Really clever and surprising. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce