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Below is the poem entitled LITTLE DAISIES which was written by poet Zeenat Nagpurwala. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I dreamt of little daisies that yestereve I’d spied,
All bathed in paling sunlight, dewy and honey-eyed.
A silken soft reflection of the dawning moon they wore
As stars their silent love into their hearts did bore.

And as I leaned towards one to breathe its beauty in,
I heard a silent whisper from somewhere deep within.
A deep enchanting treasure, a picture of seven hues,
When the withering rays formed a spectrum
With a drop of water blue.

As the last of violet vanished
And the petals bent down to sleep
As the moon took over the night sky and smiled
At the little daisies, in their slumber so deep
With such reflection of happiness,
I awoke to the orange sky
And searched for that vanished beauty that with
My vision’s passing, itself had slowly died.

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  1. Date: 3/2/2012 12:15:00 AM
    well done...marvellous...comparision....lykd it a lot

    Nagpurwala Avatar Zeenat Nagpurwala
    Date: 3/2/2012 11:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you rahul. I like this one a lot too. Daisies are my favorite flowers.
  1. Date: 3/1/2012 2:10:00 AM
    A short visit to read yours poem today and I am glad I did it,very well written. - oxox Anne-Lise

    Nagpurwala Avatar Zeenat Nagpurwala
    Date: 3/2/2012 11:28:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne :) It is one of my favorite poems