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Listen To Your Mind

Hiding inside no room to hide not enough space to move inside Stay out there stay fair always beware You come in here thinking it will solve everything if you just stay closed up you won't feel any pain Your wrong you'll die in here this place is made to operate you out there you stay in here it will lead to despair Go out there spread the news you are to be sharing and bearing win or lose. by: Virginia Frayer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/8/2011 11:49:00 AM
We should indeed listen to our mind, but never let it take complete control. One's heart has a big say also. A warm welcome to the Soup to you Virginia. Many thanks for your kind comments on my "Lorena" have a lovely day....:)
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Date: 3/2/2011 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured on PoetrySoup this week Virginia. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/4/2011 2:19:00 PM
Welcome to this site. This is a decent first submission. It could use a little polishing as far as punctuation goes, but I did enjoy reading your work. I know you will like this site and its members very much.
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Date: 2/2/2011 4:46:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight ... hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing ...check out our contests too... good luck with luv..
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