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Listen To Discipline

What do you do when you receive correction? Remain haughty then scramble in another direction? The wise ones won't shun it, but face it with courage To change their ways although they might suffer. The end result is oh so pleasing, Clothing maturity is oh so appeasing. Who needs discipline? Don’t we all? The humble embrace it to shield from a fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/7/2017 2:18:00 AM
Beautiful piece of love and truth!!!
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Date: 2/5/2017 10:31:00 AM
Nice Reminder!
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Date: 1/31/2017 10:23:00 PM
What a fantastic theme and mostly ignored wisdom. Its as if you picked a 1000$ on the street that everybody overlooked.high time you joined as a premium member
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Date: 7/21/2015 4:51:00 PM
Susan, you hit it right on discipline. Good job,
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Date: 1/6/2013 5:36:00 PM
Is this published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Or enter another one of your poems... they all seem really fantastic and creative! Wish you the best with your poetry no matter what you decide! :) -jec
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Date: 5/8/2012 8:40:00 AM
Susan, I hope someone does correct me..David
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Susan Palli
Date: 5/9/2012 12:57:00 PM
Just read the Bible book of Proverbs----who could correct us better than our creator?
Date: 5/7/2012 1:44:00 AM
Wow Susan, what a wonderful message. love this poem. harry
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Date: 5/6/2012 6:08:00 PM
Yes, i too agree. Wonderful poem. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/6/2012 12:08:00 PM
Yes, all of us ! Well said and well written Susan. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/6/2012 11:51:00 AM
True Words...'rebuke a wise man and he will thank you...' :) Well Done...Thank you for your visit I appreciate it very much! big hugs, love deb
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Date: 5/6/2012 11:48:00 AM
point well spoken. I liked it. Thanx for stopping by earlier. Ronny.
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Date: 5/6/2012 11:16:00 AM
True words. Thanks for the insight. Love, Toquyen
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