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Liquor Lips

If I were the bottle You would press your lips to my neck nightly. If I were the liquid You would consume me multiple. But I am just a woman Who needs your attention always. If only you could Liquor lips.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/13/2012 6:28:00 PM
Absolutely fantastic bit of lines here. Suddenly, I'm thirsty...hmm.
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Date: 1/13/2012 4:29:00 PM
In my state, we have to be at least twenty-one years of age to kiss liquor lips. They stopped asking for my ID at bars and liquor stores a long time ago. I see this work is featured this week. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/11/2012 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations Liberty on this weeks win, keep up the good work. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/9/2012 12:22:00 PM
Quite telling. Good job.
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Date: 1/9/2012 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations on the week`s win Liberty!! :) oxox love from Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/9/2012 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Liberty. I wish you the best in 2012 with your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2011 7:44:00 PM
simple yet soo sweet
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Date: 12/28/2011 6:29:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Liberty. I hope you will continue to write and share your poetry with us. Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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