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Lines Life and our Faith in God

Lines Life and our Faith in God

Is it possible to divide lines?
Which are of numerous types and kinds,
Like life, which always appear in different,
Forms, colors, shapes and types.

But when all these types and kind of lines disappears,
Covering the sheet of darkness,
What is left is only a tiny dot,
Which has no end and has no beginning.

From a tiny dot only life and every thing began one day,
And in a tiny dot every thing would vanish one day,
Leaving no lines of any kind bold or thin,
On the sands of time,
What would ultimately be left, as the last impression,
Would only be a tiny dot, much smaller than the rolling tears of eyes.

The Universe also started from a dot,
Even all universes and galaxies, stars and planets,
Started from a dot created by God,
And every thing ultimately would vanish,
One day in the darkness of a dot, like black hole,
About which we almost know nothing,
Except that every thing including the earth, planets, stars,
Even our body and mind and its high rising aims and ambitions
Would ultimately get lost in the magnetic darkness of the 
Black hole, which is nothing but another form of a dot.

The creative and destructive power of the dot,
Is right before us in the form of a computer,
Which builds, learns and teaches every thing,
Starting and ending from tiny tiny dots,
And places before us humans and nature,
Animals and creatures, in their true forms, except
They do not breathe, love and hate like humans.

But humans are close to create a new dot,
Tomorrow it would breathe and talk, 
It would think and walk and may also love and hate
And may be, it would start creating,
New types of humans and may start thinking himself one day,
As our new Creator or a new God.

I pondered, wondered and imagined,
What would happen, when this new God,
Would have a small amount of some power in his hand
And may become a new God for those,
Who do not believe in our faith and in our Almighty God,
As even a small amount of the power of creation and destruction,
May blind the weak humans to start thinking himself as the new God.

In such a situation, all lines of all types may disappear
For ever from us, which has so far, 
Saved us from the total disappearance of our existence,
And has brought up like a child in every religion and faith,
So that we may flourish and bloom like his Nature
And may adore Him as,
Our faith or God or as our strong and bold Dot,
Which always loves us a lot.


Kanpur India     13th June 2006

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  1. Date: 10/28/2013 4:11:00 PM
    what an interesting reflection on life, and the power of the dot!! It shows great thinking and imagining!

  1. Date: 7/31/2010 12:50:00 PM
    Wonderful passage my friend I could have thought is one my favorite so far. well pen -------love kelechi.

  1. Date: 6/17/2010 8:59:00 PM
    Bravo! Ravindra! This is beautiful, I must tell your this is what I believe also. The computer is a form of the human mind, and has become man's god. But we will hold on to the true God of faith who created the DNA dot of all things. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 6/16/2010 1:48:00 PM
    A most creative journey Ravindra.. an elegant composition of faith and introspection for all who read.. your brilliant details leave the reader quite breathless... so sorry was having major computer problems and could not reply until now.. forgive me please... hope all is well with u my dear friend. with luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 6/16/2010 10:31:00 AM
    Very deep thoughts make this a compelling poem, especially for those who are spiritually oriented. You certainly have given the reader much to ponder. I hope fath continues, even after the "new dots" are created. One for my favorites! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/15/2010 6:28:00 AM
    Excellent poem Ravindra!! beautifuly written! hope you are well my friend! lots of love Simone

  1. Date: 6/15/2010 3:42:00 AM
    MR.Ravindra, i fell in love with all your poems, but this one is brilliant.. And yes i will reveal my name for such poets as yourself. Than soon after i will change it to my poet name. I do love the perception and all the knowledge you built in your poem. I will add this one to my favorites. You are one of the many poets who I adore on this site 4 never giving me a second though to my poet destroyer name. Thank you once again.. For always making it a blessing with your poems and comments,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/15/2010 2:50:00 AM
    A creative poem, however I am in the category "who do not believe in our faith..." I liked your wording on the universe and the speck in which we are amidst spinning, twisting and chaotic matter. Thanks for this upload. Gavin.

  1. Date: 6/13/2010 9:16:00 AM
    A very nice write on Faith