Lilies

Down where the Rain Lilies blossom Rain drops drip from roses Spider Lilies dance to rain's song Color juxtaposes Spider Lilies of deep orange Spider Lilies of white Delicate petals curled upward Morning beauty delight Finis' Started July 08, 2013

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/9/2013 1:30:00 PM

dreamy words and images that take flight, sara... finally done with such aplomb... yes, colors justapose or colors juxtaposes... love this... thanks for coming around!..:) huggs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/8/2013 10:46:00 AM

can't wait for this to finish, sara... you started this off with very cathcing lines.... did you mean " colors juxtapose?".... superb, superb!...:) hugggs

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/8/2013 6:32:00 AM

I really loved the beginning of this poem, I look forward to the finished product my friend! Spectacular start Sara, lilies are one of my favorite flowers, but my favorites are the irises and roses, purple and red, or purple and white, such a great combination. Awesome Work!!