Lil Sweet Things

I must have lost myself in you last night...
I know that wasn’t the deal.
I believed the sweetly spoken soft words you said, while dreaming of another, all to my disappointment dear, I would have loved to have been, that other.
Just to get to hear, what I got to hear!
 You spoke in a whisper you never have before, saying: “ It’s all right Baby, Baby it’s all right! Your kisses dripping down my neck , your breath upon my back.
I admit, I would have loved to hear those sweet nothing’s whispered in my ear, and meant for only me. But you were lost in a dream, probaly far away from me, lost in another’s soul, consumed by fire and smoke.
However absent she was last night, I was the one who got to hear: “It’s gonna be okay Baby, Baby I am here”!


andreatravis 
copyright 10-28-12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/10/2012 9:54:00 AM
Yes! Take advantage of the moment. Enjoyed mucho. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 11/6/2012 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/28/2012 6:29:00 PM
‡ I Do Find Beautiful Passion Be It Bittersweet, Sweet Beautiful Andrea. I Love Your Beautiful Name. 'Your Kisses Dripping Down My Neck, Your Breath Upon My Back.' Wow, Definitely A Moment In A Scene FittingOf Many A Dream. Keep Brushing Your Beauty's Heart And Never Let Go. My Love, Rachel *
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