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Like No Other

And she told him that she would love him like no other woman ever will. The accented sensuality to complete his sentences, was her proclamation. The Egyptian cotton blanketing her natural breasts, sliding up his arms as she wakes him for morning consummation; epicenter consumption. She told him that she craves him beyond physical crux. He was her equilibrium; A key to Pandora’s shattered box. Its fragmented sins, now synchronous with redemption’s awakening. Even after all these years… Yet her heart was wrapped by hermetically sealed contention. … She told him that she would love him more than any other. More than any other… …like no other… More than any other… As she strokes the pride of another. © Drake J. Eszes

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/8/2013 8:30:00 PM

Ow gee..a declaration of love like no other and then the betrayal..A very stirring and sentimental poem.Some people are so greedy..they want it all and end up loosing it all..This is not love..the only love she seems to have is for herself..Taking and not giving in return or taking and giving to somebody else leads to all that s blank..empty..void..Extremely sad but well penned

Poet Tacito
Date: 8/8/2013 10:02:00 PM

So well said here, Charmaine. So well said...thank you so very much!!!! =D

Twanna Irisha

Date: 6/7/2013 10:19:00 PM

Amazing write.

Poet Tacito
Date: 6/7/2013 10:38:00 PM

Hi, Twanna! Thank you so much!

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/30/2013 1:52:00 AM

Sure is a lot of two-sided-ness going on here! It's sad to see these reoccurring elements in your poetry... I can tell it's very much apart of you. At the very least I can say it's made for some killer writing. I suppose the most emotionally inspired pieces are the ones that really grip people... you're one of a kind, mate! And the comment you made on I'll Think of a Title Later was hilarious, btw!

Poet Tacito
Date: 5/30/2013 7:02:00 AM

Yes, bit of my life experiences. I think I can honestly say that I've heard it all. It's...amusingly sad. Thanks so very much, Tim! :)

J.W. Earnings

Date: 11/11/2011 1:44:00 AM

Whoohoo! Did I just read that splendid masterpiece... I must be dreaming =). Nicely written lines and surprising parts here and there, but good altogether!

Poet Tacito
Date: 11/12/2011 11:07:00 PM

That's funny. :) Thank you so much! I appreciate the kind feedback.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/30/2011 10:23:00 PM

Wow, surprising end to a complicit rhyme. I guess it happens on both sides. Great write Drake.

J.W. Earnings
Date: 11/11/2011 1:44:00 AM

True that, Elizabeth!

Poet Tacito
Date: 11/1/2011 11:24:00 AM

Yes. Yes it does. Thank you, Elizabeth. :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/2/2011 6:08:00 AM

Robert, thank you so very much. Yes, indeed...well said.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/2/2011 5:39:00 AM

Such are the vagaries of life and love! Interesting write.

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/19/2011 4:56:00 AM

And that was the plan Cassandra. Thank you so much!!! :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/18/2011 10:28:00 PM

I really hope it can be, Stephen. I know others know of moments like this. You really nailed it on the head sir. Thanks so much for coming by!

Stephen Parker

Date: 3/18/2011 7:32:00 PM

Sounds like she was complicit but not compliant. Emotions ebb and wane, but true love is a rational intercourse. The heart has to trump the spasmodic mind and the fleeting, physical ingratiating of the body. You discovered this in the real world. Thanks for brokering this experience in an artistic manner. Your pain can be some other person's gain!

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/18/2011 7:47:00 AM

Wilma, yes, it really does. On both fronts. Thank you so much!!!! Hey Linda, thank you kindly. :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/17/2011 3:16:00 PM

thankxx Drake ..so sweet of u to comment on my contest entry luv.. appreciate your input and feedback .. looking forward to seeing your winners list as well luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/16/2011 12:35:00 PM

Drake this happens all too often, wanting something so bad, but it still breaks down in the end.. Brilliant piece :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/15/2011 5:40:00 AM

Crista, very well said. I couldn't agree with you more. Thank you so much for coming by here.

Crista Gorman

Date: 3/15/2011 5:31:00 AM

Sad betrayal that happens all to often. We should not put our trust in humankind who falters to their whims. No, but instead put your trust in the maker of heaven and earth who is faithful to keep his promise and does not delay. Good job on the poem.

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/9/2011 8:30:00 AM

Hey Linda! No contest this time around. Just a simple post. Yes, the tongue really can be. Thank you darling!

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/9/2011 7:35:00 AM

Yes...that was all a part of my diabolical plan. :) Thank you so much, Jem!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/9/2011 7:34:00 AM

WOW .. and WOW Drake.. intense dramatic lines so riveting my friend.. the passionate exchanges and the verbal promises are unique and delicious .. the tongue is quite the deceiver luv... good luck if for any contest .. stupendous premise luv..

Jemmy Farmer

Date: 3/8/2011 3:28:00 PM

Exquisitly penned sensuality, awesome twist of bittersweet too. Well done

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/8/2011 2:23:00 PM

Sara, hi there. Thank you so much. Yeah, it had to end w/a twist. Ok, I'll take a look... =)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2011 1:10:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work that speaks of romantic love to end with the bitter truth...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara..Soup mail in a few minutes..

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/8/2011 5:16:00 AM

Yeah...tell me about it. lol. Thank you so much Catie! :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/7/2011 11:04:00 AM

Absolutely Nette, well said!!! Thank you so very much! =)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/7/2011 11:00:00 AM

ohhh, a "ship" gliding on two rivers, drake! love the way you work with your stark words and theme... much enjoyed! soup mail :) huggs, nette

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/5/2011 2:33:00 AM

Hitendra, hi there! Yes, you are certainly on point with that. You are very welcome! =) Hola Kacey! Ha, I can dig your comment. "Very sexy and wrong"...indeed. lol That's awesome of you to say, thank you!