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Chaste eyes trace my limbs, in the deep of woods swerving like a breeze moist on fields of grass, His Latin fire, on edge of twilight moods. Shape of curves fondled like tender morass, the call of moaning sprawls into full grind swerving like a breeze moist on fields of grass Although he’s roamed my shore , gentle and kind I still pulsate where musk scent trails. Outside, the call of moaning sprawls into full grind My fiery sighs reflect a wilder croon holding breaths captive in a mesh; a glide of movement’s tempo sing to rising moon And kindling now our chaste eyes, they abide love’s virtue wafts from wings of night; to hold breaths captive in sweet flow, a glide! Inhabiting one space where gazes meet Chaste eyes trace my limbs, in deep of woods... Love’s virtue blazes skin from curl of sheets His Latin fire, on edge of twilight moods. The simple times remembered are worthwhile. Those memories are treasured gifts to keep. We were innocent and lived without guile. --------- Inspiration from Nobel Prize poet, Pablo Neruda from Chile. Excerpts from his poem 'Ode to Naked Beauty' follows: Ode To A Naked Beauty With chaste heart, and pure eyes I celebrate you, my beauty, restraining my blood so that the line surges and follows your contour, and you bed yourself in my verse, as in woodland, or wave-spume: earth's perfume, sea's music. ---- Terzanelle Time for Joseph May Old poem Re-submitted 11/8/2017

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Date: 12/10/2017 5:18:00 AM
Beautiful and passionate Nette...Thank you and Congrats on your win
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Date: 12/9/2017 7:43:00 PM
Awesome write :) ,Nette, congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/23/2012 4:15:00 AM
Hey where r u?Computer/internet/problem?
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Date: 9/1/2012 10:13:00 AM
nette, congratulations in Joann's "copy cat contest" have yourself a great day.. ~LUV~PD
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Date: 8/31/2012 3:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/30/2012 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Copy Cat" contest Nette. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/27/2012 9:36:00 PM
Wow!Wonderful and beautiful write,Nette.Nice adaptation and great job..Congratulations on well deserved win..Super win..Millions of Huggs...
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Date: 8/27/2012 9:24:00 PM
Whew!... Ohh my god!... Oh me oh my!...Mercy sakes!... and, and... all that other stuff!...absolutely beautiful, pure and erotic poetry, Nette!...every couple whose relationship has gone a little stale should read this...Congratulations are DEFINITELY in order - Tim
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Date: 8/27/2012 5:17:00 PM
wow, this one is HOT, Nette. Love your poem AND the one you chose to emulate. Congats to you!
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Date: 8/27/2012 3:12:00 PM
You can tell..you love..love nette! Congrad's on your win, and such an interesting choice of poet too! Light & Love
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Date: 8/27/2012 12:55:00 PM
Beautiful images, as always. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/17/2012 9:47:00 PM
Great translation and lovely poem! It creates a wonderful ambience...good luck in Joann's contest!!
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Date: 8/13/2012 12:52:00 PM
Superb poem bears a clean depth of love of purity. It's nice my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/12/2012 8:24:00 AM
Nette, what an awesome write, I just love this :) wishing you the best for Joann's contest *hugs* Wilma
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Date: 8/12/2012 7:29:00 AM
I like yours better Nette, maybe someone should investigate your poetry and find a new poet laureate!
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Date: 8/11/2012 7:57:00 PM
Wow!Amazing poetry here Nette...love this!
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Date: 8/11/2012 6:55:00 PM
nette,,, this is excellent...missing you and the soup.... ..xox~pd
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Date: 8/11/2012 2:40:00 PM
lovely write, Nette - interesting form too (must try it)
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Date: 8/11/2012 5:19:00 AM
Expressive and emotive work..Passion penned...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/11/2012 4:26:00 AM
My dear Nette,Nette and Nette this is So BEauTiFuL !!!!! - Have a lovely weekend!!!! - oxox // always Anne-Lise :) <3 <3 <3 <3
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Date: 8/10/2012 8:52:00 PM
Oh Nette, your write is very sensuous! This is a very passionate poem my friend! I love the grandiose meaning behind this romantic piece! I really enjoyed this poem and what it's all about, I visualized my wife within and I was the Latino...burning with fire! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/10/2012 7:26:00 PM
‡ This Is Absolutely Sensual & Beautiful, Sweet Beautiful Amazing Nette; Wow ... My Luv, Rachel ‡
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Date: 8/10/2012 6:19:00 PM
Glad to be back.. I have missed my PS friends.. This is beautiful nette! I love it... cory
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