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Chaste eyes stroke my limbs, in the deep of woods
swerving like a breeze moist on fields of grass,
His Latin fire, on edge of twilight moods.

From shadow of lines fondled like curved brass,
the call of moaning sprawls into full grind
swerving like a breeze moist on fields of grass

Although he’s played my shore in many chimes
I still pulsate where musk scent trails; just here,
the call of moaning sprawls into full grind

Gentle navel opens a wilder croon
holding breaths captive in a mesh; a glide
of movement’s tempo sing to rising moon

Caressing now our chaste eyes, they abide
love’s virtue wafts from wings of night;
holding breaths captive in tight mesh, a glide!

Inhabiting one space where gazes meet
Chaste eyes stroke my limbs, in deep of woods.
Love’s virtue blazes skin from wraps of sheets
His Latin fire, on edge of twilight moods.


 Inspiration from Nobel Prize poet, 
Pablo Neruda from Chile. Excerpts from 
his poem 'Ode to Naked Beauty' follows:

Ode To A Naked Beauty

With chaste heart, and pure
I celebrate you, my beauty,
restraining my blood
so that the line
surges and follows
your contour,
and you bed yourself in my verse,
as in woodland, or wave-spume:
earth's perfume,
sea's music.


Copycat Contest of Joann Grisetti
by nette onclaud

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  1. Date: 9/23/2012 4:15:00 AM
    Hey where r u?Computer/internet/problem?

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:13:00 AM
    nette, congratulations in Joann's "copy cat contest" have yourself a great day.. ~LUV~PD

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 3:15:00 PM
    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Joann's "Copy Cat" contest Nette. Sorry to be late commenting. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:36:00 PM
    Wow!Wonderful and beautiful write,Nette.Nice adaptation and great job..Congratulations on well deserved win..Super win..Millions of Huggs...

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 9:24:00 PM
    Whew!... Ohh my god!... Oh me oh my!...Mercy sakes!... and, and... all that other stuff!...absolutely beautiful, pure and erotic poetry, Nette!...every couple whose relationship has gone a little stale should read this...Congratulations are DEFINITELY in order - Tim

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 5:17:00 PM
    wow, this one is HOT, Nette. Love your poem AND the one you chose to emulate. Congats to you!

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 3:12:00 PM
    You can nette! Congrad's on your win, and such an interesting choice of poet too! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 1:06:00 PM
    Magnificent! Congratulations on your win, Nette. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 12:55:00 PM
    Beautiful images, as always. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/17/2012 9:47:00 PM
    Great translation and lovely poem! It creates a wonderful ambience...good luck in Joann's contest!!

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 12:52:00 PM
    Superb poem bears a clean depth of love of purity. It's nice my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 8/13/2012 4:49:00 AM
    This was a sheer delight to read Nette, awesome. Sure to do very well in the contest.

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 8:24:00 AM
    Nette, what an awesome write, I just love this :) wishing you the best for Joann's contest *hugs* Wilma

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 7:29:00 AM
    I like yours better Nette, maybe someone should investigate your poetry and find a new poet laureate!

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 7:57:00 PM
    Wow!Amazing poetry here this!

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 6:55:00 PM
    nette,,, this is excellent...missing you and the soup.... ..xox~pd

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 2:40:00 PM
    lovely write, Nette - interesting form too (must try it)

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 12:08:00 PM
    Beautiful poem to read this Saturday evening,dear Nette:-) Have a great weekend ahead! Huggss..nah wait:Double Huggss:-)

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 5:19:00 AM
    Expressive and emotive work..Passion penned...Thanks for stopping by..Sara