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Like A Specail Paradise

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Like A Specail Paradise

Summer Trees glistening in the hot sun,
Making the world like a special paradise with tons
Of different things,
Like the birds how they sing, Making music,
 Using our imaginations as we see more beauty around us
The green scenery with majestic mountains in the morning daylight 
Gives us a peace that things will be alright,
The feeling within the air as the wind softly howls,
And the trees sway,
Show us what kind of God created such a beautiful day.
The soft poky feeling of the grass beneath my toes,
Makes tingles creep up my spine,
As I listen in the park to children playing that are not mine,
And I heard dogs barking, Trees swaying, horns honking,
People talking, birds singing,
And other sounds that make you wonder why we can’t be still,
Like the mountains and the grass, and the trees,
I know we live in a fast paced world, but if we don’t slow down and enjoy
The beauty within the world that we see everyday yet,
We act like it’s not there,
Such as the beauty in the sunset, the grass beneath our toes, Children playing,
 Laughing, Living without worries of tomorrow which shows us the
kind of God who  created such a beautiful day. Who Gave us this beautiful paradise.

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  1. Date: 6/23/2012 11:02:00 AM
    This is a beautiful poem, people often fail to see and listen to the beauty around them, sadly some children today, dont even know the meaning of nature, lost in the big citys looking at concrete, love elizabeth

    Kostman Avatar Jane Kostman
    Date: 6/23/2012 11:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That is too true Elizabeth.... Thank you Hugs jane
  1. Date: 6/23/2012 10:42:00 AM
    All these new advancements in our lives were suppose to make life easier.. I ask one and all have..have they? May we all find peace and be blessed.

    Kostman Avatar Jane Kostman
    Date: 6/23/2012 10:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for your comment on my poem. Yes what you say is so true.... Peace to you to hugs jane