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Like a Melody

I have a love, deep and strong, a love I waited for, oh so long, A heart string tied from him to me, our love is like a melody.

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Audonus Taylor

Date: 10/29/2010 3:13:00 PM

Let me start by saying your name is awesome, it has that writer sound to it. Secondly, this piece was short but served it's purpose. I too believe the relation of music and love. Melody is the word love should be equated with. The beautiful,catchy, immortal song that flows to the heartbeat... Love is a melody. Great Job!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/25/2010 9:02:00 AM

Lovely, can hear the melody of love, Sena! Keep on writing and thank you for your comments...Have a nice week!...Gert

Deepanshi Chaudhry

Date: 6/4/2010 10:27:00 AM

truly..very truly..a melody..thank you for sharing this with us!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/4/2010 10:11:00 AM

This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Sena. Love, Carol