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Light prismed attic

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I used the word bye as an illustration; you may know in compedative sports if you don't get a match to play, they give you a bye ticket; and you wait till the next time
comes, like God says the rainbow is promise of better to come (Paul speaks of running
a race to God ) also I used the term in-violate as word play on colour and purity..
The attic means our limited heaven/skies; ever means for our understanding of a long time.." Whereas God Is eternal & will change all things when he wills; schism again means a crack if you will.. That gives just a glimpse of the colours of Gods Heaven through those rainbows..! 

I thank whoever reads this for taking the time. Yours Joe..)

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Light prismed attic

Open aired and pastel pillared, vaulting the ceiling; 
This bye to Paradise; & illuminating vision:)
Stand in-violate, in golden tones, in orange hues
in glowing aqua, do you colour my view,
The mark of Heavens promise, on earth:)
Expanding in an instant; you beam of Gods mirth.
A schism In prism; here ever to bloom, 
Fresh from the Masters hand on the loom.!

copyright Joe

For P D's Rainbows contest:)

 You can click to know more about this piece, thank you Joe..)


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  1. Date: 1/22/2013 10:31:00 PM
    Stopping by to see your colorful poem again! Hope all is well with you!

  1. Date: 1/17/2013 11:41:00 AM
    my favorite thing to see in poetry is creative use of language and you do this in spades. Your 'more about this piece' entry illustrates my point but even without that, it's all there to be discovered. Wonderful

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 10:34:00 PM
    and you fill out the virtual habit, as the monk informed the rabbiot... love it Joe ...

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 12:54:00 PM
    Joe I enjoyed reading this tonight and the "about the poem" part made this even more special.. A lovely message you shared here.. how are you doing? Congratulations on your win as well ;) Wilma

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 10:16:00 AM
    The "more about" just gives me insight to understand the deeper meaning I now find in this Joe. How wonderful to know there is a greater power tha tguides us and cares. Beautifully said; Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 4:12:00 PM
    Colours great an beautiful, halos of saints inscrutable, sharper colours there just aint, sees the Lord of saints as suitable.... immutable...

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    Date: 10/21/2012 1:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    God bless you Don.."
  1. Date: 10/7/2012 1:16:00 PM
    love this clever write, Joe

  1. Date: 10/6/2012 3:35:00 PM
    Very descriptive and expressive work..Yes, the rainbow is fresh from the Master's loom with a beautiful promise..Read your add on..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 3:56:00 PM
    wow wonderful poem Joe,, such imagery..

  1. Date: 10/4/2012 12:15:00 PM
    Thanks for this special creation, Joe. Congrats on your win. Love, daver

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 3:38:00 PM
    NIcely done, nicely won. Wonderful to see you on this winners' list, Joe. BIG congrats.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 6:04:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Rainbow Fun~" contest Joe. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 1:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win, Joe.

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 10:39:00 AM
    Congrats on your well deserved win,Joe!Have a peaceful and splendid weekend:)

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 8:22:00 AM
    Congratulations Joe a terrific piece here xx

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 6:33:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 2:25:00 AM
    Many congrats Joe for this wonderful win

  1. Date: 9/29/2012 12:11:00 AM
    Hi Joe,, I'm having tons of rainbow fun ;-) reading and congratulating all my colorful "Rainbow Fun" winners. A sweet congratulations, ,,thank you for inspiring the contest...goodnight~ xox~ PD

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 7:49:00 AM
    I read the "more about" and it adds somuch to the meaning of this lovely write. All the best in the contest Joe, PD will love it! :)

  1. Date: 9/25/2012 8:44:00 PM
    Hello Joe, I'm not peeking at your verse... But, i am stopping by this page to say hi,,, and thank you for the support.... hugs & love...pd