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Light and Rain

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Light and Rain

The light, it stuns
you, causes illusion
Eradicates darkness
causing pollution
Breathe in the air,
fresh in abundance
In this wild light,
let go and just
dance
Let go of your
sorrow, pity and
pain
Skip fly and wander
sheltered from rain
Nothing can touch
you, keep up your
pace
One two three one
two three don't lose
your place
Step in time with
song in your heart
Lose all thoughts
that keep saying
"you can't"
Let it go free, push
it away
Kick off the binds,
run off astray
You're free in your
heart, just keep out
of line
Don't listen to the
darkness and all
will be fine
Dance forever
onward, forever
young
Let your heart sing
till its song is
sung
One two three one
two three, take up
the lead
Keep in the light
from darkness
concede
Let the rain in, and
dance all night long
Sing in the rain,
your own private
song
Freedom is this, not
bound and
constricted
Go anywhere you
want, no where's
restricted
Wander and search,
keep up your beat
Keep getting faster,
don't trip over your
feet
Breathe in and then
out, let your mind
slip
Care about nothing,
feel your heart flip
Promise me this,
you'll stay here
forever
Free and with me,
what could be
better?

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  1. Date: 2/23/2012 5:06:00 AM
    Here is a poem that we can enjoy today and Sev written it! Thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 1:13:00 PM
    Lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it, especially the verses go anywhere you want, no wheres's restricted.

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 8:37:00 AM
    thanks for sharing have a nice day ~always *P.D.

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 6:16:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Sev. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/20/2012 4:44:00 AM
    I like this very much. It is uplifting, positive and refreshing.