Light

lover by day, sleeper by night. some times I wish, the sun wasn't so bright.

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S. Michael Fuller

Date: 4/21/2009 8:22:00 AM

Lover by day...... wow. It's so nice to hear a voice with some vision. Mike

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/17/2009 2:30:00 PM

Powerful words here. You really express emotion in your words very well but it seems the soul of this writer is confined by a certain sadness. Keep your heart light my friend for you obviously have so much to offer. Well done. Smiles from Lolita

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/17/2009 1:41:00 AM

The simplicity of this couplet speaks volumes, great job...Raul

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/16/2009 10:53:00 AM

mmm ... here is one to make us think ... below the surface is the soul of your tradition ... on a leaf of suggestion.