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Life's struggle and limits

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Life's struggle and limits

One day our ship will port in a place of peace and wonder.
Abaft facing the wind and sails at rest.
Limp from its journey, tired and sunder. The bolt rope holding it together.
pushing stead course toward its mark breaking every crest.
awaiting to reach its voyage end, brails to pull along the way.
The shore that limits the journey stay.

Copyright © George Maris

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  1. Date: 5/6/2011 5:11:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you George. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 5/5/2011 4:41:00 AM
    I can picture this, you have a nice write here, cory