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Lifes Jigsaw

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This Poem I wrote and posted here in August last year, no one commented on it, i have tweaked it a little, let's see what happens now.

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Lifes Jigsaw

Life is like a huge jigsaw
Each piece a part of life
From the moment we're born
Piecing together stress and strife

The overall picture is of summer
Showing the blue sky of living
Fluffy clouds show some discord
Through quarrels and misgiving

Then comes the sea of greenish hues
Family and friends denoted here
The boats that bob on the waves
Look like they are shedding a tear

See, there is a field of grass and corn
With arms waving enjoying the sun
A scarecrow looking so forlorn
Used as a home by mice having fun

I spy a house with chimney smoke
Welcoming all with open arms
With croeso* written on the mat
Enter here for peace and calm

The final piece of the puzzle
Is the one held in my heart
Waiting to say let's go home
We've another puzzle to start

*Croeso     -    Welcome       (pronounced    croy so )

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  1. Date: 2/21/2013 3:12:00 PM
    What a clever comparison to write about. Very enjoyable.

    Date: 2/21/2013 4:07:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you David, the original poem I wrote no one looked or commented on it. Hmm whatndoes that tell me I wonder? ....Seren
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 2:19:00 PM
    This is a masterfully crafted write, one that I really enjoyed immensely my friend! I loved reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a highly creative piece you have written here Seren, very nicely done, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 2/21/2013 11:10:00 AM
    There's no place like home ever......nice poem

    Date: 2/21/2013 12:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Donna......Seren
  1. Date: 2/21/2013 10:59:00 AM
    Very nice, Seren...and so upbeat... Terry (and great images)

    Date: 2/21/2013 12:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Terry thanks for stopping by...Seren