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Lifes Jigsaw

Life is like a huge jigsaw Each piece a part of life From the moment we're born Piecing together stress and strife The overall picture is of summer Showing the blue sky of living Fluffy clouds show some discord Through quarrels and misgiving Then comes the sea of greenish hues Family and friends denoted here The boats that bob on the waves Look like they are shedding a tear See, there is a field of grass and corn With arms waving enjoying the sun A scarecrow looking so forlorn Used as a home by mice having fun I spy a house with chimney smoke Welcoming all with open arms With croeso* written on the mat Enter here for peace and calm The final piece of the puzzle Is the one held in my heart Waiting to say let's go home We've another puzzle to start *Croeso - Welcome (pronounced croy so )

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Date: 2/21/2013 3:12:00 PM
What a clever comparison to write about. Very enjoyable.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2013 4:07:00 PM
thank you David, the original poem I wrote no one looked or commented on it. Hmm whatndoes that tell me I wonder? ....Seren
Date: 2/21/2013 2:19:00 PM
This is a masterfully crafted write, one that I really enjoyed immensely my friend! I loved reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a highly creative piece you have written here Seren, very nicely done, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/21/2013 11:10:00 AM
There's no place like home ever......nice poem
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2013 12:04:00 PM
Thanks Donna......Seren
Date: 2/21/2013 10:59:00 AM
Very nice, Seren...and so upbeat... Terry (and great images)
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/21/2013 12:04:00 PM
Hi Terry thanks for stopping by...Seren

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