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Life of a Tree

I am naked now, my limbs are bare A chill blows through me during the night air No one notices me, children do not climb I stand still hoping not to lose a branch of mine No green, no orange, no red I am just grey This season I do not like because of being this way Soon the sun will begin to show My little buds of color start to glow Encircled by luscious green grass I will be Seasons are my life, this next one I like. ©Holly P. Moore January 2013

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Date: 2/13/2013 11:35:00 PM
I really like this one!!! It would do well if someone ever had a tree contest I think. Glad to find this one tonight.
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Date: 1/6/2013 3:59:00 AM
very beautifully written poem.. enjoyed it so much dear Holly...wishing you have a blessed weekend :) <3<3<3
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Date: 1/3/2013 7:32:00 AM
Holly a poem a hope..David
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Date: 1/2/2013 2:25:00 PM
hope in a tree.
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Date: 1/2/2013 1:34:00 AM
Lovely, Holly. Yes...spring brings hope of renewal and new life! Love this use of personification! "I think that I shall never see..a poem lovely as a tree"...fits this work of yours so well. There is beauty in your words! Hugs!
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