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Life In Demise

As I grow older I become less afraid of the fact that life will all soon end nothing more then a crumbled barren waste land forgotten looking back at times we had met our greatest down falls our most horrible demise having the cruelest leaders in existence But what do I know I'm only the ripe age of 13 nothing more then hidden ignorance with a sense of independence believe what you will but you can not hide from the fact that we will all meet our demise......

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Date: 3/10/2016 12:30:00 PM
Mariah, nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 7/19/2015 5:23:00 PM
HI, wondering, why you decided not to post another poem. Love SKAT
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Date: 4/23/2013 10:32:00 PM
Mariah, Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"
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Date: 4/22/2013 5:10:00 AM
Thank you for your well written poem Mariha. - Welcome to P-Soup! - Have fun with writing, reading and comments with us. - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/21/2013 7:18:00 PM
Hello Mariah, a deep thought on how we will meet our demise. , "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 4/21/2013 1:24:00 PM
Very nice piece full of truth and imagery
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