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life in demise

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life in demise

As I grow older I become less
afraid of the fact that 
life will all soon end nothing 
more then a crumbled 
barren waste land forgotten

looking back at times we had  met 
our greatest down falls 
our most horrible demise 
having the cruelest leaders in existence

But what do I know I'm only the ripe age 
of 13 nothing more then hidden ignorance 
with a sense of independence believe what 
you will but you can not hide from the fact 
that we will all meet our demise......

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  1. Date: 4/23/2013 10:32:00 PM
    Mariah, Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"

  1. Date: 4/22/2013 5:10:00 AM
    Thank you for your well written poem Mariha. - Welcome to P-Soup! - Have fun with writing, reading and comments with us. - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:18:00 PM
    Hello Mariah, a deep thought on how we will meet our demise. , "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 1:24:00 PM
    Very nice piece full of truth and imagery