Life

When life feels confusing and you are sad remeber am here Beside you You may not see me You may not feel me Nor hear me Yet am always there I am the stars that shine so bright at night The earth that lay underneath your feet The breeze that flows through your hair on hot summer day I'll always be with you in your dreams and in your soul I'll watch over you from the heaven's Dont fret my child even if am so far away I'll always come to you Rember this my child when you cry I'll be by your side To wype those tears of sadness And bring tears of joy Dont worry about the past with sadness and grif Rember the past with Hapiness and Merriment Look to the future and what's in store for you.

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Nicole Arvizu

Date: 2/1/2011 5:47:00 PM

LOVE TIS

Stephan McBride

Date: 1/30/2011 7:24:00 PM

Great Job, I really enjoyed reading your work, very well put together

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/29/2011 10:47:00 AM

I do think that this is very inspiring, Nicole--it is always soothing to know that there is Someone who is watching over us, and who we can always rely on, if we just have the faith-- uplifting poetry you have here :) btw just want to help-- some typos on "remember" and "wipe" -- keep writing Nicole :) --& thank you for dropping by my poem :) -- nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/28/2011 9:35:00 AM

Excellent Nicole, I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol