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Life

Begin at the beginning is a good place to start It makes this poem less tart sliding from oozed cocoon box the lions have dens, the holes for fox screaming is the first noise issued followed by the orchestra, snap of tissued help, first comfort, live source growing, crawling, helped by guiding force noise, turns to speech of understanding running with friends, heart finding new palpating severed from Mother, put into class many hours of sunshine day passed by glass innocence and imagination creeping in Mind, sponge of perpetual learning Ten, innocence flirting with early romance ending child-like state, maturity dominance father gone, replaced by foreign rule never seen someone so cruel Middle and High, progress to Schools thrown into pens with some fools many friends, smorgasbord variety some try maintaining sense of piety learn more about self but not all from schooling secret meetings of passion, extreme heat, then cooling growing both physically/mentally stress where to go, what possibly JC, CSU, UC? sometimes they don't let you see more to life then this madness never seem to reveal or confess Robe, with tassel hat and gown some stand up and some go down scattered pearls among swine some go far, some stay close, all fine some going here and there some make it with bruises, some skin fair becoming adults, transitional line hardships or smooth sailing we will fine working and schooling but who are we fooling it can be hard, stressful for sure sickness, flu season, try to find a cure death, taken without warning all of these memories consuming had to get this out to you all before my brain-kept fall seeing life and all its glory all its pitfalls, sometimes gory side, summarizing here shell-shocked there and there flowers all in a row my mind will grow and grow internal struggle through Academia and depression the world, external, reflecting recession we will pull through, hope Don't let them simply say, "Nope" life, roller-coaster up 'n' down spin, spin, Dervish gown everything turns this way and that skinny, bloated and fat but Joseph crawled from the well after being pushed and fell light returns after cycle, night sometimes we must throw-done, fight don't give up, keep going keep doing what your doing

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Date: 10/26/2009 5:49:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Colin. Wishing you a great week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2009 9:59:00 PM
Colin, I'm at a complete loss for words. This is honestly my favorite you have ever written let alone my favorite poem I think I have ever read. And I promise that. It's amazingly great and captured so much of life in it's naked form. Great poem! Wow...
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