Life

life is all we have love is what all we want careness is what we need but i ask do you love your self care for your self life is what you make it only you can make you happy but love is what everybody whats thats what i don't have

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Simone Segal

Date: 10/28/2009 1:55:00 PM

Lovely poem, I believe to love yourself truly, is the greatest love of all, when we can do this, we can over flow with love for the world, and the world will love us back. lot's of LOVE Simone

John Freeman

Date: 10/24/2009 10:03:00 AM

I like your personna "Love" Jordan you will go far in life with that type of attitude as God's love. Good job, Sincerely, Moses

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/14/2009 8:40:00 AM

Hey Jordan, good poem! Everyone wants to be loved. That's true. I believe there's someone for everyone. We should not give up hope! Besides, the one who took the time to put you together loves you or he wouldn't have wasted his time! Peace, audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/14/2009 4:44:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your awesome write with us today Jordan. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/13/2009 8:57:00 AM

Interesting thoughts. Someone loves you and that someone is a friend that stickest closer than a brother. Keep writing. Sara