Another poem written in childhood (teens.)
(Another childhood poem) A pamphlet file in green metallic thrusts through neon antinight its cornered self, harsh in glare. Piers of five-tiered fingers -- shelves -- extend beyond, in series: a formal pattern, rectangular and angular. Artificial electric shine reflects bland or blatant color. There are books, some in disarray in order placement on the shelves. All: solid, relentless, inflexible. And most were made for use by patterns much more rigid still.
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