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Letting the Fingers Tell the Stories

Pounding, constantly pounding on an old Brother typewriter now so antique: letting the fingers tell the stories with fatigue, but tons of paper I trashed improving! Thinking, deeply thinking by delving into vivid imagery: to bring to life scenes belonging to a brief youth that was fleeing, but not living it fully...it took away all joy and ingenuity! Pounding, constantly pounding... sipping coffee, catching breath while rewriting and editing: I didn't have to meet a certain deadline battling hell; no editors to appease...no rejection letters in the mail! I haven't auctioned it on eBay; my well-kept typewriter is stored in the dim attic with other popular items of the day: collection plates, baseball shirts and a crucified Lord! Pounding, constantly pounding on an old typewriter now so antique; I spent endless nights by this window writing: dreaming of fame...never considering critique! What I cherished about fancy verses was not their richness but their meaning; I shouldn't have kept them short: avoiding any revelation of personal feeling! Pounding, constantly pounding on keys that needed a rest on weekends and special holidays, but dedication didn't allow any cheating: it impelled me to think and type, letting the fingers tell the stories!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/19/2016 7:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win and keep thumping away, great poem.
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Date: 7/18/2016 4:38:00 PM
Andrew, I like how your repeated lines emphasize your frustration at getting your story on paper. Good write! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
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Date: 7/16/2016 1:28:00 AM
Andrew, Lovely win. WUV **SKAT**
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Date: 7/16/2016 1:09:00 AM
Andrew, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my blog "The Perils of Getting Old" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/20/2013 9:19:00 PM
Congratulations.... enjoyed stopping by tonight ~LINDA
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Date: 5/13/2013 12:17:00 PM
Continue to pound on your machine .... it is always something you want to get on paper - Well done, a very good poem Andrew. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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