Letting the Fingers Tell the Stories

Pounding, constantly pounding
on an old Brother typewriter now so antique:
letting the fingers tell the stories with fatigue,
but tons of paper I trashed improving!

Thinking, deeply thinking by delving into vivid imagery: 
to bring to life scenes belonging
to a brief youth that was fleeing,
but not living it fully...it took away all joy and ingenuity! 

Pounding, constantly pounding...
sipping coffee, catching breath while rewriting and editing:
I didn't have to meet a certain deadline battling hell;
no editors to appease...no rejection letters in the mail!  

I haven't auctioned it on eBay;
my well-kept typewriter is stored
in the dim attic with other popular items of the day:
collection plates, baseball shirts and a crucified Lord!

Pounding, constantly pounding
on an old typewriter now so antique;
I spent endless nights by this window writing:
dreaming of fame...never considering critique! 

What I cherished about fancy verses was not
their richness but their meaning;
I shouldn't have kept them short:
avoiding any revelation of personal feeling!   

Pounding, constantly pounding
on keys that needed a rest on weekends and special holidays,
but dedication didn't allow any cheating:
it impelled me to think and type, letting the fingers tell the stories!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 7/19/2016 7:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win and keep thumping away, great poem.
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Date: 7/18/2016 4:38:00 PM
Andrew, I like how your repeated lines emphasize your frustration at getting your story on paper. Good write! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
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Date: 7/16/2016 1:28:00 AM
Andrew, Lovely win. WUV **SKAT**
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Date: 7/16/2016 1:09:00 AM
Andrew, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my blog "The Perils of Getting Old" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/20/2013 9:19:00 PM
Congratulations.... enjoyed stopping by tonight ~LINDA
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Date: 5/13/2013 12:17:00 PM
Continue to pound on your machine .... it is always something you want to get on paper - Well done, a very good poem Andrew. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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