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Below is the poem entitled LET ME BE YOUR HEART'S GUEST which was written by poet Amit Valmiki. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Living inside your heart,
Is like living in a prince’s castle.
The color of your love is pale, 
As your haze is strong even from the gale.

Seeing you in a very first time was my mistake,
And; gaining you is my only sanctify.
Each and every instant is a rage,
Without you this mundane is a cage.

Now I’ve understood,
This world is intangible for me.
The only place to live is inside your heart,
And want to be its part.

Let your heart be my dwelling.
Or feel me as a guest
I will give you the love and my feeling,
In me which is only rest.

Copyright © Amit Valmiki

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  1. Date: 10/7/2011 2:33:00 PM
    Powerful words! Captivated now. Love gives thr greatest joy and sorrow at the same time. Thanx for commenting on my Vampire's love....

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    Date: 10/8/2011 8:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you very much, keep visiting.
  1. Date: 10/7/2011 12:02:00 PM
    Woww, you have a great writing here, Amit. Seriously, this is flow just like that and leave a meaningful trace in my heart. Touche! Thanks for stopping by my page. Dinda