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Let It Go

The past is like a tornado that cuts a deadly path. Through heartache and regression it can fill the soul with wrath. When dreams are dust and hope is faint it's time for letting go. There's nothing left but compromise and no seeds left to sow. You might become a prisoner in your own circumstance. Unless you rise above the fray and bravely take a chance. A chance to live the present and forgive your history. Just let go of the pain and life won't be a mystery.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/3/2012 10:18:00 PM
sometimes it is really hard to let it go. but we stil gotta try right? nive write girl. keep up the good work!
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Date: 4/3/2012 9:52:00 PM
Excellent message in this poem, Deb!
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Date: 4/3/2012 12:08:00 AM
nice deb! u can express ur self ma
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Date: 4/1/2012 8:09:00 PM
Well that's the way to capture the theme and the contest. Best of luck to you. Luv n hugs Michael
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Date: 4/1/2012 4:41:00 PM
Very well written Deb...truely stated...big huggsss my friend,love deb :)
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Date: 4/1/2012 4:27:00 PM
nicely said and well-rhymed. i enjoyed it!
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Date: 4/1/2012 1:21:00 PM
Excellent metaphors, loved the write. A most enjoyable read.
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Date: 4/1/2012 10:59:00 AM
captivating words that surely impresses the meaning of letting go.. you caught me right away on line 1, deb... best wishes and huggs! :)
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Date: 4/1/2012 10:35:00 AM
Really nice poem....full of great advice and wisdom.....Enjoyed !!
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Date: 4/1/2012 10:32:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Deb. Well written and full of sage advice. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim
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