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what a sunrise! what a day! God in front to take all good deed people all in line for god to select I alone was left behind unhappy unsatisfied i asked "why not me? i help i donate never i asked for your help never i cheated to top never i wanted partiality never i wanted to be selected never i was unsatisfied never i asked anything from you never i was furious never i had ill thoughts never i wanted to harm others i wanted happiness all around always i loved beings then why not me? why why and why?" god politely replied "see flash back you proved all things said wrong you want heaven from me you want me to be partial you are furious you want to be selected you are unsatisfied. this was a test for heaven which all had given proving wrong but trying hard you are proved wrong for this time so i keep you on earth for a noble cause the one you did spreading HAPPINESS live life without want" suddenly god disappeared leaving me with a new view of life so i will try try try vrushani thaker

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Date: 10/14/2012 8:12:00 AM
..Amen to this one!..well written..we cannot question God's love, for God is Love..:)
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Date: 9/7/2010 11:45:00 AM
Nice conflict and lovely conclusion which you have brought in last of the Poem 'so i keep you on earth for a noble cause the one you did, spreading HAPPINESS live life without want'. Beautiful analysis of human cry for heaven. Love and best wishes...Ravindra.....Vrushani Thaker.
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:15:00 AM
thnk u very much....Mr. kapoor....i felt really gud....
Date: 8/15/2010 4:15:00 PM
well done the concept of a message is needed when we are left behind,..p.d.
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Date: 8/14/2010 11:53:00 PM
very nice vrushani, I will try also. Charles
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Date: 8/13/2010 8:08:00 AM
Creative imaginary write, keep it up, and thx for ur comment on mind :D
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Date: 8/12/2010 4:22:00 PM
Wonderful contest entry ..good luck .. with this brilliant and creative write tonight.. expressive and impressive Vrushani... with luv..
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