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Leave Me Not

leaves golden amber burgundy wants to stay around just a little longer

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 11/1/2008 7:02:00 PM

Brrrr! Winter is coming. Vince

Sue Mason

Date: 10/31/2008 9:50:00 PM

Love the title ... wonderful use of this form! You've really been busy the last couple of days with your writing!! Glad you're at the Soup!

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/29/2008 8:44:00 PM

Deneen I reckon so - Great Haiku - Thank you Deneen for all the wonderful comments and please don't ever worry I have the Lord, my Wife and Children so I'll be fine - I just have to write it out of me sometimes - I love your heart - God Bless

Lena W

Date: 10/29/2008 3:54:00 PM

I just love the fall and its change of season, you put this so vividly.

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 10/29/2008 1:12:00 PM

Most beautiful Haiku -expressive of sentiments of autumn struck leaves or may be of an aging person. I would wish you to read my poem The Frost-bitten Leaf. Thanks for your generous comments on my Haiku Profound Verses.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/29/2008 7:38:00 AM

But their time is up. Mr. cold is here. Great job Deneen of painting a clear picture.

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/29/2008 5:49:00 AM

Yes, gorgeous. If only they could stay longer. Love, Shar

Daver Austin

Date: 10/29/2008 4:48:00 AM

Colorful image, Deneen. Haiku is so sensitive. Love, daver

P Sheart

Date: 10/28/2008 9:22:00 PM

Deneen A beautiful fall embrace that doesn't want to let go.... Seasons seems to come and go so fast don't they! Maybe it's because I'm getting older ha! Take care hun Love Light Truth Patricia

Constance La France

Date: 10/28/2008 7:48:00 PM

Hi... I feel the same way... nice haiku.. constance

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/28/2008 6:29:00 PM

I love the title with it's double meaning! A great haiku! :) Carrie

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 10/28/2008 6:18:00 PM

Deneen lovely theme and well done too! Laura :)