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Below is the poem entitled LAST NIGHT I DREAMT which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I search your woods, I walk them long
Through every twilight mood and beat;
Sometimes,  the mirage peals  a storm
Or gushes rain as ferns entreat.

While droning fireflies bright as stars
Pound on my chest like stones' mild tap
A whispered breeze speaks our memoirs
On hanging vines as buds unwrap.

From nowhere, smoke darkens the view
As foul ravens begin their prowl; 
Your shadow looms high, to pursue
dark wings, but frailty takes control

Last night I dreamt the same vignette
Where those bleak eyes wailed down on me
An omen sighing, that love’s at threat;
Till your woods roused my fantasy.

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  1. Date: 8/11/2013 11:57:00 AM
    a nice winning write nette ;}

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 3:19:00 AM
    a wonderful win Nette..... SKAT

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 11:43:00 PM
    Hello Nette, Congratulations in "Last Night I Dreamt ... contest :-)" xox~~~ always Linda

  1. Date: 8/6/2013 2:25:00 PM
    Great winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:43:00 PM
    Great job Nette, congratulations!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 9:24:00 PM
    Congratulations on another very fine entry and win, Nette!

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 8:10:00 PM
    congrats nette on your 3rd place win in the serious category, beautiful

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 12:01:00 PM
    What a hectic dream! Lots of images i saw there, it's like i was watching a fantasy awesome write Nette!!..luv Godwins:):)

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 8:07:00 AM
    That last line gave me massive goosebumps. Hell of a dream you had here...

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 8:09:00 PM
    You have created another masterpiece by this descriptive brilliant write! I truly love the dreamscape you have put together for this illustrious poem my friend! I'm amazed by this charming piece, such a Grand Work!!

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 7:39:00 PM
    You dance on your poem and I hear the music of your soul, another lovely write Nette, enjoyed xxxx

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 1:06:00 PM
    Lovely Nette. I love the way the poem comes full circle with "your woods". Much mystery in your dreams - I hope love is not at threat. Perhaps the dream you dream tonight will offer solace in those same woods and the whispered breeze of memoirs will rouse more fantasy. I love your command of the English language in your poetry. Very creative and enchanting. Joe

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 12:22:00 PM
    An intriguing tale....Makes one wonder where ir how or where it will end....hugs

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 12:17:00 PM
    GORGEOUS! You truly paint pictures with your words, Nette. Always such a pleasure to read your work.

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 11:41:00 AM
    Unique and creative work that you have penned...Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 11:08:00 AM
    WOW.....what a mind you have....beautiful