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Last Night I Dreamt

I search your woods, I walk them long Through every twilight mood and beat; Sometimes, the mirage peals a storm Or gushes rain as ferns entreat. Last night the fireflies bright as stars Pound on my chest like stones' mild tap A whispered breeze speaks our memoirs On hanging vines as buds unwrap. Last night Contest Sponsor: Francine Roberts Serious Category 7/31/13

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Date: 8/11/2013 11:57:00 AM
a nice winning write nette ;}
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Date: 8/11/2013 3:19:00 AM
a wonderful win Nette..... SKAT
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Date: 8/7/2013 11:43:00 PM
Hello Nette, Congratulations in "Last Night I Dreamt ... contest :-)" xox~~~ always Linda
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Date: 8/6/2013 2:25:00 PM
Great winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:43:00 PM
Great job Nette, congratulations!
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:24:00 PM
Congratulations on another very fine entry and win, Nette!
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Date: 8/5/2013 8:10:00 PM
congrats nette on your 3rd place win in the serious category, beautiful
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Date: 8/1/2013 8:07:00 AM
That last line gave me massive goosebumps. Hell of a dream you had here...
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Date: 7/31/2013 8:09:00 PM
You have created another masterpiece by this descriptive brilliant write! I truly love the dreamscape you have put together for this illustrious poem my friend! I'm amazed by this charming piece, such a Grand Work!!
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Date: 7/31/2013 1:06:00 PM
Lovely Nette. I love the way the poem comes full circle with "your woods". Much mystery in your dreams - I hope love is not at threat. Perhaps the dream you dream tonight will offer solace in those same woods and the whispered breeze of memoirs will rouse more fantasy. I love your command of the English language in your poetry. Very creative and enchanting. Joe
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Date: 7/31/2013 12:22:00 PM
An intriguing tale....Makes one wonder where ir how or where it will end....hugs
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Date: 7/31/2013 12:17:00 PM
GORGEOUS! You truly paint pictures with your words, Nette. Always such a pleasure to read your work.
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Date: 7/31/2013 11:41:00 AM
Unique and creative work that you have penned...Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 7/31/2013 11:08:00 AM
WOW.....what a mind you have....beautiful
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