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Last Night I Dreamt

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Last Night I Dreamt

Last Night I Dreamt..

In the corner of a dark room I stood
Nail biting to sooth my mood
As a figure sat across the room 
I wanted to see him, but couldn’t move

His head moved left to right
Pounding fights ready to fight
You bet, he gave me a fright
As I shivered praying for light

He came closer, his chair so loud
Paralyzed I couldn’t make a sound
Then he stopped as if bound
With a gasp relief I found

At that moment something changed
So I stepped forward and saw the chains
Like an animal he was chained and caged
His eye watered, as he bit on his gag

His bounding bars I could now see
And the pain in his eyes feel
I could recognize him
Because he was me



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  1. Date: 4/20/2014 5:47:00 PM
    Very we'll written and nice flow :) Ana

  1. Date: 8/2/2013 7:23:00 AM
    A deep write Ronny. It had me on the edge of my seat (no pun lol) from start to finish---clever use of rhyming too.

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 7:47:00 AM
    wow, came to my mind same as this other person who commented below. That was a great ending to this fine poem.

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 9:14:00 AM
    Wow! its wonderful.