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Lapping the Beach

As the wave as I lap as we lapse into sleep soft laps that lap with a lapping along the form of this beach forming the breath of each breath of this lap of the lapping along this warm sandy cove where I lap with the lapping where I had loved as the lapping as the lapping as the lapping as the lapping as the lapping as the lapping as we love is lapping so lets lay here and lap with the lap of the lapping as our hearts beat with lapping as we lap Oct 17, 2010

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Date: 2/18/2016 12:47:00 PM
HUGH, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/6/2015 12:52:00 PM
HUGH, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 5/9/2011 9:54:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup dear friend. .Such a beautiful poem. .have a happy b'day C.C
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Date: 5/9/2011 9:20:00 AM
Thanks for the welcoming.
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Date: 5/4/2011 4:12:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Hugh. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2011 8:34:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. love your creative write today
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