Lakeside

My heart is swelling in my throat 
Candid emotions trespassing this note...
Love is the only cure to my heart
A cloud of fire depicting my past 
Now that you have finally arrived, 
trust and care would dwell inside.
My eternal lover we are not born to die...till we meet by the lakeside.
.......

fantasyrhyme

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Paul Callus

Date: 4/1/2016 3:32:00 PM

My type of poem...short, emotive and beautiful! One of these days we should mix ink:) hugs // paul

John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 3/12/2016 9:55:00 AM

A perfect account of Love.

Poet Tacito

Date: 8/14/2013 10:52:00 AM

You have a thing for the water & lakeside, as you often talk of it in your work, from what I've read so far. Waterfalls must be a massive rush for you, because it is for me. Excellent lines, once again!

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/12/2013 11:51:00 PM

I'm here for you always .

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/12/2013 10:50:00 PM

Well said. Where have you been?

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/12/2013 10:26:00 PM

Soup mail

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/12/2013 9:09:00 PM

I see you are a romantic. I enjoyed your poem.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/11/2013 8:47:00 PM

Hi Red, have not seen you for a long time... :-) Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 12/29/2012 1:35:00 AM

Beautiful write Red! The longing for love makes hope spring in the heart. Nice!

David Williams

Date: 12/28/2012 8:28:00 AM

Red, Have a happy new year...lovely to see you...David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/25/2012 5:13:00 AM

Beautiful poem !!!!!! :) MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR,RED !!! * * * <3 * * * // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/24/2012 10:15:00 AM

wow this amazing you are one that is missed on here, dear Red, and your poem, tells us why.... have a wonderful festive season...

David Williams

Date: 12/23/2012 1:03:00 PM

Red, a Merry Christmas and peaceful time to you...David xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/18/2012 6:54:00 PM

Stay away from the lake!!! Sorry just having a little fun. I enjoyed your poem.

David Williams

Date: 12/18/2012 1:50:00 AM

Red, oh it is just great to see you back, this is just a stunningly romantic write, a wondeful image is now in my head and I like what I see...I was only thinking of you the other and wondering how you were doing, hope things are smoothing out, it really is great to see you here, Christmas is now complete, have a Peaceful holiday...David xx

Dan Kearley

Date: 12/17/2012 8:54:00 PM

So nice to see you back again... :o) Another beautiful write to touch my <3 Thanks for stopping by,and commenting on my last write...I will take your words to heart,and leave it be. :o)