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Kite of a forever day

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Kite of a forever day

Breaths of air raise... emotion.) classic form 
departure is.. "a feeling through a line"
bright red; sky or blue.!
my first inkling of..
wide ranging 
as dad 
and I 

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  1. Date: 7/15/2013 8:32:00 AM
    This is an exquisite and poem with it's perfect form (shape and concrete) my dear friend, Joe. It also reminds me about my dad (now in heaven) who loved to fly kite with my younger brother. I love it so much. Thanks a lot for sharing and thank you so much as well for your precious time to read my latest poem & your very inspiring comments. Have a great day! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:12:00 PM
    Hello Joe, one of my all time favorite poet.., Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 2:54:00 PM
    I like this "Shape" poem a lot. I haven't flown a kite in a long time but enjoy watching peoplefly them. This poem reminds me of line of a Moddy Blues song: "This day will last a thousand years - if you want it to" Peace &blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 12:59:00 AM
    Joe, I was the one who sponsored this kite flyin contest..This really was a great entry and the only entry in this Idyl form...This could also be a concrete poem, right?...I read all the comments beneath it and it seems to be fav'd one that I should have placed...Thanks for your uplifting tho't on my teenie tiny lil poetry pages...maybe someday I will become as great a writer as u! You got some vernacular, KID!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 7:56:00 PM
    classic form, departure is... am inhaling deep . Beauty write, thanks Joe, glad I got to ride on the tailwinds of this one, namaste :) ~N

  1. Date: 5/13/2012 10:13:00 PM
    and waiting. ......

  1. Date: 5/11/2012 10:31:00 AM
    liked the format here Joe, been in the un-healthy realm lately so I haven't been able to do work, but the health is getting better and maybe with God's help I'll return stronger than ever we'll see. Your good my English freind how are things across the pond, As they say cheerio for now Robert God bless

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 2:12:00 PM
    This is such an enjoyable poem, Joe. I am having trouble figuring out what you want in your contest. I didn't see the haiku. Oh well, I guess others do since you already have entries. Best wishes to all the contestants. Love, Crolyn

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 8:27:00 AM
    Lovely Joe. Thank you for your kind comments on my poems. Always appreciated.

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 10:29:00 AM
    Very well penned, Joe! Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 8:19:00 AM
    The form you chose for this write of yours dear poet, brings this poem to life ! A write which made my mind and heart this morning swell with joy and eager to share with my lil' Noah ! TY sir, and have a wonderful rest of the weekend my friend ! Much love, james

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 8:31:00 PM
    I'm still waiting, joe, I KNOW you can come up with some poems!!!

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 8:26:00 PM
    every toy grows you out of childhood.

  1. Date: 5/3/2012 7:23:00 PM
    Well constructed, Joe! Ahhh... the possibilities as the kite swoops and dives!Nice imagery. Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 7:32:00 AM
    That "feeling through a line," the possibilities. I like this one mucho the second time around. It grabs at consciousness one is not even aware of. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/2/2012 12:42:00 AM
    keep coming back to this one. It is one of my favorites of yours.

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 7:27:00 PM
    Thanks Joe for my placement keep up all this fine writing! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/28/2012 5:29:00 AM
    This is a quality write. Structure, wording lend to the emotion of this poem. Excellent!

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 5:10:00 PM
    deeper still the authors quill, builds to the flying part, range of sky from red to blue, emotion merged with art.... great poetry Joe.... did look at the lady ....

  1. Date: 4/26/2012 3:17:00 PM
    Joe, did you see the movie on Wilbur wilberforce? It was named after that Amazing Grace song. Very nice! Maybe I can't be online much this weekend. But I hope to get back here full scale after that!