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King Sun and Goddess Sea

One summer day, enraptured by the Goddess Sea, King Sun shone down with all his might; most splendidly he moved the Goddess, for she rippled laughingly a shimmering reply to Sun in azure sky, and while reflecting that same hue where King Sun dwelt, her turquoise ripples lengthened, for the goddess felt herself now rising up with joy. Wave after wave was leaping, frothing. . . as King Sun more strongly gave his final rays to her. Then he descended low that he might kiss the lovely Sea on earth below - to kiss her soon before the last day’s shadows fell, and so he touched her where she’d let her body swell. With yellow gold, his final glow, he bathed her face, but when the night arrived with sable colored lace to drape the goddess, Sun had vanished from all sight; below Sea’s depth he’d sunk - to love her through the night. For Suz's "Let's Be Open" poetry contest and now for PD's Anything Goes Contest

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Date: 3/31/2014 7:39:00 AM
A very beautiful piece. I like it, so very creative. Great poet indeed. Congratulations for winning the top friend Andrea ;) ;) cheers! hugs ;)
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Date: 3/30/2014 12:35:00 PM
This is really good. Congratulations on winning top spot -JT
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Date: 3/29/2014 10:23:00 PM
Good win in PD's comp. Love the imagery, although it appears I was thinking of a different swell ??.
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Date: 3/29/2014 4:10:00 PM
WOW my friend! You have taken the theme of nature and turned it into something sensual and erotic...LOVE the concluding 4 lines especially and I can't help but wonder if they had any offspring? That could be another series of poems! Congrats on your 1st place win - Tim.....PS: I see that you are a member of 'Whispers' too? I read your St. Paddy's Day poem and left a comment - Tim
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Date: 3/29/2014 4:08:00 PM
Lovely, congrats on your win
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Date: 3/29/2014 2:55:00 PM
Positively erotic Andrea , Loved it .
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Date: 3/29/2014 11:18:00 AM
Hi, Congrats on your win Andrea. Superlative imagery and enjoyable read. Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 3/29/2014 11:10:00 AM
I love the Idea of this poem. the poem is just wonderful. Congrats on your win Andrea......Hugs.......Roger
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Date: 3/29/2014 10:53:00 AM
a nice take on the sun and sea, how am I going to catch up if you keep winning? nice win my friend, congratulations
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Date: 3/29/2014 10:11:00 AM
Congrats on first placing Andrea. Personification at its best. One of my favs. // paul
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Date: 3/29/2014 9:56:00 AM
Great poem Andrea...Congrats on a great win
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Date: 3/29/2014 9:11:00 AM
Congrats Andrea !! Well deserved top win! Sun and sea meeting very well written !!
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Date: 3/29/2014 8:28:00 AM
Sensual in all the right ways. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/29/2014 8:17:00 AM
What a beautiful take on love Andrea. Congratulations on the win
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Date: 3/29/2014 2:46:00 AM
Beautiful and wonderful...Great work...Truly I have seen your portrait . Rhythm of love...Rhythm of human life...Best wishes from my heart...Sandip
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Date: 3/29/2014 2:21:00 AM
Well constructed and penned poem. Congrats on a fine win, andrea
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Date: 3/29/2014 12:46:00 AM
Beautiful Andrea... Congratulations - first place - :)... Verlena
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Date: 3/29/2014 12:15:00 AM
my kind of poem..... CONGRATULATIONS.... THANK YOU ANDREA.... XOX....LINDA
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Date: 11/1/2013 9:09:00 AM
Congrats on your win, I really enjoyed reading your poem, a lovely write indeed! blessings, Stacey
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Date: 11/1/2013 7:43:00 AM
congratulations on your win Andy this is where I am used to seeing you ..no 1 xx
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Date: 10/30/2013 8:52:00 PM
The Sun making love to the Sea...wow wow wow... brilliant verse and glowing imagery. Congrats :)
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Date: 10/30/2013 1:35:00 PM
This is why you are number 1 poet of last year !! Congratulations deserved on this win.
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Date: 10/30/2013 1:11:00 PM
wow! Andrea, breathtaking. Love the win *Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/30/2013 12:03:00 PM
Superb piece! Congratulations on your win friend Andrea :) Cheers!!
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Date: 10/30/2013 3:07:00 AM
So beautiful! Congrats, Andrea! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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