King

Have you ever wished,
that you could be King,
with a huge golden bell,
at your leisure, to ring,
servants lined up at your feet,
feeding you grapes,
and forbidden good eats,
the King of your very own castle,
without worrying bout work,
and all of it's hassels,
A King who is noble and strong,
who gives out golden coins,
even when you've done wrong,
yes, that's who Id'eike to be,
but, yes, it is only in fantasy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 10/20/2010 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations Susan on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Yah for "K"!". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:39:00 AM
Fantasy for some, reality for others Susan. Many congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest >> James
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Date: 10/20/2010 4:23:00 AM
Susan, congratulations to you on your win in Nikko's contest ~ Wilma
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:31:00 PM
Yes, but I'd rather be the queen and not have to worry about the directing the country. heehee. jUst sit back in luxury! Congats on your win in this fun contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/19/2010 3:47:00 PM
Pretty much of a fantasy for most of us. Congratulations Susan on your placement. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/19/2010 11:21:00 AM
that would be cool for awhile anyway, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/19/2010 10:46:00 AM
Just for a day..that would be cool...congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 10/19/2010 10:18:00 AM
Susan, Congratulations on a poem well worthy of a place in the top 10. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:34:00 AM
Congratulations, Susan-- it sure would be wonderful if we could be kings and queens even just for a day-- nikko :)
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:11:00 AM
Well done, Susan! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/19/2010 7:54:00 AM
ConmgraTULATIONS on the well deserved win in the contest, susan
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Date: 10/19/2010 6:22:00 AM
Congrats Susan on your win in Nikko's K contest with this wonderful entry and win.. enjoy sweet success today with luv..
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Date: 10/7/2010 5:02:00 PM
unfortunate as can be is a fantasy. I wish I where a king. This is an awesome piece. hope many more come. -RED
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