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Kill the Seed

Down in the dark This is where pain grows To kill the seed Dive where no one knows Swim through trenches, Wet suit will only slow you down When you've found the seed Rush back up to the top Before your lungs explode Rushing back take note Water will be bluer, Sky clearer Sun Peaking This is the fresh air you've been seeking

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/20/2012 7:46:00 AM
Your talent leaves me gasping for air. Great poem, my friend. I think you have snagged another fan. I will visit from time to time.... so.... Keep the coffee warm..... Jake
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Lynn Dolly
Date: 12/20/2012 3:43:00 PM
THanks for reading my stuff! There'll always be warm coffee here :)

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