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Kill Me

kIlL mE... tHeRe ArE tImEs, My GoD, tHeRe ArE tImEs ThAt I wIsH i WaS dEaD mY hEaRt SpIlLs ReSeNtMeNt AnD sCoRn Of ThE sElF aNd So mAnY oThErS tHeY dOn'T dEsErVe ThE hAtE—nO oNe DoEs SoMeTiMeS cOnFiNeMeNt BlUrRS mY hEaRt AnD mInD lEaViNg Me In A sOrT oF dEpReSsIoN rEwInD wHeN nO oNe GiVeS a DaMn AbOuT tHe RhYmE wHeRe AlL tHeY wAnT tO dO iS cOnSuMe ThE gRiMe I aM sIcK tO tHe MaRrOw Of KeEpInG It (IxNxSxIxDxE) bUt I wIlL tOrTuRe No OtHeR WiTh My MiNd ThErE aRe TiMeS, mY gOd, ThErE aRe TiMeS tHaT i WiLl MySeLf To SmIlE bUt (IxNxSxIxDxE) i ScReAm (KiLl Me). . .KILL ME i want to die. . .

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  1. Date: 2/27/2013 5:42:00 AM
    I like a good dark poem...and the way you made it look is adds to the chaos!

  1. Date: 1/18/2013 2:59:00 PM
    im sue i already comented on this like it its similer to one I wrote called introspection love the pattern please soup me have not heard from ypou for a while hope you well xx davidscott

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 1:41:00 PM
    One can't help feel the emotion, frustration and anger in this Laura; I feel it must have come from experience and just hope you made peace with the issue. Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 10:51:00 PM
    This is awesome Laura,,, I lOvE tHe WaY yOu DiD iT ;} Happy New Year ;}

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 2:48:00 PM
    not long ago I totally related to this poem. but that time has passed. i liked ThE wAY yOu DiD It.

  1. Date: 1/3/2013 8:02:00 AM
    Wow, Laura this is exceptional, a wondrous poem i've ever seen, you must have a reason for the shape of this.. i would love to see this wriiten as free verse, this message with in is amazing... happy new year...

  1. Date: 1/2/2013 6:54:00 PM
    Wow! I bet that was just ~ScReAmInG~ to get out!!! I LoVeD it!!! Those words just ScReAmEd to me..Oh so true...Oh so true... None of that now!You have to stay! Please? :o)