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Keys To Bliss

Mind filled with dust I could not see further The sea breeze and the mist Could charm me no more My heart longs for my love How could I hurt her? Felt bitter, I lost hope Will she leave me for ever? Legs take me to the waves I cannot believe my ears I hear her voice, was so sweet She was right back, so near Tears filled our eyes Wipe away the dust in my mind Kiss her lips, tap her cheek She hit me back, I do not mind The door was locked Seemed a while before My keys to bliss back with me I hold her in my arms forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/6/2010 1:46:00 PM
I have never tried this form, Suresh. Very interesting and quite sentimental. I will have to investigate. Thank you for your comment. I appreciate it.
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Date: 11/5/2010 10:12:00 AM
Very interesting though I am not sure I understood the slapping part. Is this a poem of someone going to die in the ocean? REminds me of the classic story, Wuthering Heights! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/4/2010 6:59:00 AM
Interesting write..The slap her and she hit me..Not sure about that..If true that you loved and then were apart, may your love for each other grow.with gentleness and understanding..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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Date: 11/4/2010 6:33:00 AM
Pangs of love are pain giver either way, Suresh
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