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Keep breathing

Your flying over cloud nine
So hard for the world to see behind your tears
Its raining too much,but your always raining too much
You take a deep breathe,you take it all in with too much fear
Fear wont help you breathe,so moron,inhale and exhale through your lungs
And now your falling from cloud nine

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  1. Date: 12/24/2011 8:35:00 PM
    Sajdah... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

  1. Date: 10/20/2010 8:57:00 AM
    Wow, i reallly love this. Im feeling it with the impact from the fall...

  1. Date: 6/5/2010 11:04:00 PM
    amazing write.and a great push forward for all that need a helping hand. haha,lol. moron?((: -always&forever lynette

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 9:04:00 AM
    A pretty powerful poem, Sajdah. It seems to be written to a specific person. I too know some people in my life, who need to learn how to "take things in" and BREATHE!! LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 6/4/2010 7:02:00 AM
    This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Sajdah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 2:06:00 PM
    Thought provoking.. ~ rgds WN

  1. Date: 6/3/2010 1:55:00 PM
    Interesting thoughts that you have penned in this one.Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara