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Just You and Me

We walk hand in hand down to the stream, Walking in silence as if lost in a dream; I can hear the slow babble of the creek, Happier now than I thought I’d ever be; Soon our fishing poles lay forgotten on the ground, Just you and me with no one around; We lie in the shade watching the clouds, Telling our dreams and wishes aloud; The horses draw close and then fade away, Nothing can spoil this beautiful day. ~Tirzah Conway~ ~For the "Write Me Rippling Stream" Contest~ June 1, 2011

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Date: 6/9/2011 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Tirzah. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Tirzah
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:55:00 AM
Beautiful poem...congrats Tirzah on your win.
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations Tirzah on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem~
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:43:00 PM
Congrats Tirzah on your exciting win in Constance's contest with this splendid write .. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:53:00 PM
This was and is a most beautiful and well written, very creative piece of wonderful poetry. I would give it my vote. this was such a vivid piece of writing. good luck in the contest. I am going to put this in my favorite poems.
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