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Just Thoughts

thoughts of you dance in my mind like wind through trees tossed upward in a breeze these fragmented memories twirl around pulled forth from where they once rested when i tucked them away so long ago... a storm as it passes mingles warm with cold excitement with fury fear with anxiety dark with light ...and then through all this rain i taste the pain as my emotions bend like little branches ready to snap the what ifs what could have beens echo in my mind ...and then in a flash they are gone

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Date: 3/20/2016 3:02:00 PM
my friend, Where are you?? I thought i finally had caught up to you again and you have not been back to answer my email for at least a month or two. this is a lovely poem that somehow got past me. I had thought i had seen all your poetry. i don't know if I ever got your new address in my email, so I hope you will drop me a short note. Mine is as ever wordwarrior55@hotmail.com!!
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Date: 11/10/2012 10:28:00 AM
beautiful poem, glad the thoughts remained long enough to record on paper here for soup...
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