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Outburst of joy from the silvery streaks, Of skies with blue and clouds that speak - Silenced by the breeze, the waves flow through Washing the past...for a life so new. If only my heart could touch you now It will speak of love and a solemn vow With a new day from a lullabye of the night My life with you starts a brighter sight. You wake me up from my deep slumber When all else were gone in mid-September We met and crossed the bridge in May I held your hand..."I'm willing to stay." Now the sun is up and seeks for us, apart A lot of questions congest my heart Why should we be so far from each other? Will destiny lead us through, so soon to be together? I ache so much to wake up, alone From the sturdy night my strength can hone Lest I forget that, there's always YOU, my day should start I will just close my eyes...and look inside my heart.

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Date: 10/24/2009 3:04:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words. Nice use of rhyme and imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 10/22/2009 4:52:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Annie. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 10/18/2009 5:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Annie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/21/2009 4:30:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Annie. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/20/2009 4:03:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful poem Annie, a delight to read>>James
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Date: 9/20/2009 3:08:00 AM
Nicely done with good Rhyme and Rhythm. Keep writing. Sara
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