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Just Open The Window

Just open up the window
And push away the screen
Which so rudely protrudes your view
Look at nature, the things unseen
The things made openly too

Just open the window
Feel the cool breeze
Taste the honey sweet scent
Hear the buzz of the bees
Trace the paths to where the went

Just open the window
Allow nature to open your eyes
So you can see the world of grace
Just open the window
Strip the horrible disguise
That humans have laid on this place

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  1. Date: 10/14/2009 2:30:00 PM
    Nicely done love the rhyme. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 10/14/2009 11:00:00 AM
    I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Jen. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol