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Just Open the Window

Just open up the window And push away the screen Which so rudely protrudes your view Look at nature, the things unseen The things made openly too Just open the window Feel the cool breeze Taste the honey sweet scent Hear the buzz of the bees Trace the paths to where the went Just open the window Allow nature to open your eyes So you can see the world of grace Just open the window Strip the horrible disguise That humans have laid on this place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/14/2009 2:30:00 PM
Nicely done love the rhyme. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/14/2009 11:00:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Jen. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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