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Just By These Words

The effects the event the horizon the before and then the after the miracle of life the hatred of death the armor of military ensemble the unstoppable the plague the cure the smiling down on a child frowning down on idleness The lake the shore the hunger for more the rivers the streams the sun that beams down on black white and everything that walks and sings the lighter the flame the bridge over troubled waters the fathers with no daughters no the daughters with no supporters the poor that's getting poorer the people that's out of order the beginning the ending don't tell the ending the blabber mouth the seduction the animal instincts the people that dont think that's on the brink of disaster the boredom the excitement the juror the indictment the irresponsible the irreplaceable lawyer the war hero also known as the warrior the God in me the energy the synergy He is your majesty He's in me actively the creator the jealous one  The only one  the only begotten son the God of Israel the God that heals so therefore I conclude that I am healed just by These words

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Date: 12/4/2010 7:42:00 AM
There are too many "daughters with no supporters" these days, Anton, and the sons don't have it much better. Faith is the only thing that helps us go on. And what you said about your grandmother possibly hearing you when she was in a coma -- it brought some comfort to me. I wnted so much for Dad to hear us. Thank you,Carolyn
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Date: 11/29/2010 3:05:00 AM
very powerful piece here my friend
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Date: 11/28/2010 4:17:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Anton. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/27/2010 9:54:00 PM
Enjoyed the poem, very inspiring 'take care *luv~SKAT
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