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Just Another Day

Overwhelming skies Bursting with colours so bright Encompassing souls With that brilliant star of gold That lifts a spirit so "blue"

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James Fraser

Date: 4/12/2011 11:24:00 AM

Many congratulation's Brandee on your win in Rick's fine contest.....:) smiles

John Freeman

Date: 3/23/2011 8:27:00 PM

Great to see you in the top 6. Brandee, with this worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/23/2011 1:45:00 PM

emotion and nature woven exquisitly. Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2011 8:49:00 AM

Oh, I really like the way you describe the sun's golden rays lifting blue spirits, Brandee. That's so true! Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 3/23/2011 6:23:00 AM

Amazing write here Brandee!Congrats on your win--kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2011 4:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Brandee in ^Rick Parise's contest "Blue & Gold". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2011 10:23:00 PM

I love how you took this one to the gold star lifting the blue spirit. Congratulations.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/22/2011 9:09:00 PM

What a wonderful poem, Brandee, a little different yet so awesome. congrats. Harry

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/22/2011 8:56:00 PM

Oh Brandee I love this thought. Very warm congrats for this win.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/22/2011 6:58:00 PM

You are right. When the skies burst with color, it can become overwhelming and lift one's spirits. Medicine from nature-medicine from our creator. Congrats. Gwendolen

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/22/2011 4:29:00 PM

lovely tanka Brandee, congrats on your win in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/22/2011 12:29:00 PM

Congrats Brandee on your super win in the blue and gold contest with these awesome words depicting the colors so well luv.. enjoy another sweet success ...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2011 10:17:00 AM

Very creative work..Congratulations on your win..Sara