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Just An Old Attic

As we ransack Grandma's jumbled attic in her blatant old house, numerous ladybugs and even a mouse snared in yellow dust, layered thick. A rusty dress form displays only a hat and a distant wall sports a battered ole' bat. Boxes of antique shoes are staged in a perfect row. Scads of newsworthy magazines, records of years past, pictures, fashions of Victorian times in frames, made of wood to last. From a rickety stairwell it's an effort to sneak a peek. There's little chance to run around, no space for hide and seek. Large lofty windows appear to leak as the floor feels unsound. A passé leather trunk full of winter scarves and such sits on a mattress, once a GI's bunk. Ah, there's a large Webster's lexicon next to pieces of broken glass from a battered kitchen hutch A brass rack holds a faded quilt draped in a heaped mass. There's a wheel chair, a crutch - wonder where those have been? There's Grandpa's old uniform with many medals, somewhat torn. An empty silver flask that once held his Gin. A child's rockin' horse sits alone beside an honest-to-God telly with a cradle & faded numbers from overuse of long ago. A recipe file in a dark corner, at least that's what the label says. I wonder how often Grandma sat up here after Granddad passed away? Many old treasures, to her so dear, as well as her Bible & an old rug upon which she would kneel to pray.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/23/2009 8:11:00 AM
The poem does not only bring to light many treasures, but is itself a treasure. Love
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Date: 3/23/2009 8:09:00 AM
Your other poem written is a great poem, congratulations. This sisland boy just loves the sea in it.
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Date: 3/19/2009 7:35:00 AM
Thank you both for your critiques. I appreciate your feedback. You both seemed to know personally about my Grandmother's old attic! They were fun, weren't they?
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Date: 3/19/2009 4:20:00 AM
so beautiful! bringing back a lot of great memories... i always wanted to keep all my stuff from the litle frocks i wore when i was born till whenever... so i can have it in a museam.. i am so full of myself! :)... really cute writing... loved it!! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/18/2009 4:43:00 PM
This is so beautiful and touching. Some true treasures live within the dust of an attic like this. As a child I loved to play dress up and tea party with the things I found in the attic. Such wonderful memories. Extremely well written. Thank you for sharing. Smiles from Lolita
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