Jonquils Droop

jonquil's blossoms droop seen through tiny willow leaves... cold cloudy morning

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/17/2013 4:42:00 PM

Remarkably, it is almost time for this. It comes in a month or two where I live. Thanks for looking forward until then. It takes something special.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/16/2013 4:18:00 PM

lovely Sara, so visual

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 2/16/2013 10:55:00 AM

Very nice Hauki Sara. It's amazing in just a few words so much is said. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2013 11:48:00 PM

You are back in top form with THIS awesome haiku!!!

Jack Horne

Date: 2/14/2013 12:54:00 PM

lovely haiku, my friend. Glad you goty a chuckle with the vampire poem - it was kind of tongue-in-cheek

Terry O'Leary

Date: 2/14/2013 12:20:00 PM

Beautiful, Sara (as usual)! Terry

Len Gasun

Date: 2/14/2013 8:23:00 AM

This is another very beautiful poem again which I enjoyed reading tonight my dear Sara. Thank you so much for sharing. I'm stopping by also to greet you and your love ones a great and happy Valentines Day! Wish you all the best of love this Heart's Day and always! take care! love and hugs, Leonora

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/14/2013 8:20:00 AM

I love how you describe the world around you my friend! You bring this world to life by your awesome words! You are very talented this way, I felt like I was there looking at your Jonquil's blossoms on a cloudy morning! This is such a lovely poem, I enjoyed reading this piece this morning, What a peaceful poem, Great Work!!

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/14/2013 7:49:00 AM

Lovely haiku !!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/14/2013 7:42:00 AM

How you love nature! :) It is His handiwork...The heavens declare....and so does my friend, Sara. God bless. I don't know the Jonquil...must look it up! :) Thanks for sharing! Hugs!