Jenny Free Verse

JENNY FREE VERSE
 

Balaclava over my head,
I nipped into the John Hewitt 
and went nervously up to the bar. 
'Are you a poet?' a woman's voice inquired. 
I dreaded the question, so embarrassed. It was a key moment. 
'I'm ... I play with words on paper!' 
I fumbled in my pocket for a pen and notebook. 
'I'm having fun with the language!' 
I laughed - I felt a great weight 
lift from my shoulders 
as she slipped the balaclava
off my head and kissed me. 

'Can I buy you a drink?' the lady 
bought me a Pernod, and hey presto! 
we were off to the races, 
talking passionately 
About Heaney, Mahon and Longley. 

Jenny Free Verse 
gave me her number, 
promised to have a look at my notebook 
and give me some feedback. 
'Cheers!' 

I waltzed down the street, 
got back to the house in ¾ time, 
got my Italian leather, hand-crafted, 
writing journal out from the tall boy 
and wrote, ‘I just met Jenny Free Verse!'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/6/2015 6:52:00 PM
Hi Ken, is that your site. ganzhoukenny@yahoo.com I would like to check it out... LINDA
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Date: 4/5/2015 11:27:00 PM
ken, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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Ken Colonsay
Date: 4/6/2015 3:47:00 AM
Thanks linda, be sure and post some of your poetry to me at ganzhoukenny@yahoo.com all the best and Happy Easter! kenny
Date: 11/3/2014 3:28:00 PM
this is sure a sweet poem. Hey, I see this was posted a long time ago . Linda, who has passed away, is here welcoming you to Soup in 2012! Hope to see a lot more poems from you!!
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Ken Colonsay
Date: 11/3/2014 5:26:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thanks for comment. Sorry to hear about Linda's passing but I'm sure she's just changed rooms, as it were, in our multi-dimensional universe. Great site!
Date: 9/14/2012 11:23:00 PM
thankxxx for your kind comment Ken and welcome to Poetry Soup family .. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonite luv .. a grand tale ..
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Date: 9/13/2012 10:09:00 PM
Ken, great verse about a verse... xox~pd
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Ken Colonsay
Date: 10/20/2014 11:29:00 PM
thanks, I'm not averse to a wee verse even if written in Erse!
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