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Oh, I’m going to meet you my fair Yasmin I’ll hug you, 'till you laugh Oh, I’d want to meet you in mad Mumbai, beneath the orange sky If I could I bring with me a ticket or three I’d wrap you up, the kids in tow I’d take you home with me. We’d turn our backs on the city life on men we’d find a place where we’d be safe a place where writers blend beneath a sky of blue We women four would grow and grow we’d be most famous you’d see cause there’s nothing to compare to show I care, than to have you here Yasmin. Debbie Guzzi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/2/2013 6:49:00 PM
A lovely poem and a nice tribute to Yasmin! It would be great if we could all meet each other, someday. Another terrific poem by you, Debbie!
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Date: 11/17/2013 7:00:00 PM
gosh, you should have entered this one in my little contest I just judged. It would have worked! yes, Debs, to the question you just asked me.
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Date: 11/12/2013 8:16:00 PM
A caring beautiful win...congratulations
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Date: 11/8/2013 11:00:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 11/6/2013 9:16:00 PM
Congrats on your Meeting The Soup poets win........ LOVE SKAT
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Date: 11/5/2013 11:33:00 PM
love the win DG..... Linda
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Date: 11/3/2013 6:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Debbie. I read underneath that she cried when reading it. Hats off to you for touching her heart. Well done, my friend. Licia :-)
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Date: 11/3/2013 4:51:00 AM
Ahh!! Thanks for the visit to my page and the lovely thoughts left there..I haven't looked at the winners' list yet..This work shows generousity of spirit on your part..Sara
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Date: 11/3/2013 2:00:00 AM
(Informally Reviewed) Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely with flowing thoughts of inspiration and imagination.
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Date: 11/2/2013 7:38:00 PM
such an awesome poem. congrats, Debs.
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Date: 11/2/2013 2:24:00 PM
very sweet...congrats on your win
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Date: 11/2/2013 1:29:00 PM
Debbie, this is so encouraging! Congrats on your win! Nice to meet you my Souper-Friend! Bless you always! :-) - Den
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Date: 11/2/2013 12:37:00 PM
I knew she would love this one...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/2/2013 11:28:00 AM
A delightful win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/2/2013 10:31:00 AM
What an endearing poem of friendship!! Love this warm invitation to Yasmin.....this must have encouraged her want to begin packing her suitcase!!
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Date: 11/2/2013 9:38:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, debbie
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Date: 11/1/2013 2:41:00 AM
I love it when you reveal that part of your heart..that soft tender caring part..Its so beautiful and Yas deserves it..Tnks for stopping vy sweet lady
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Date: 10/30/2013 12:24:00 PM
Yasmin must be smiling beneath the orange sky in Mumbai. Great tribute...I guess she is a poet too! Friend, JM
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Date: 10/30/2013 8:06:00 AM
Lovely, Debbie....So sweet and full of love and empathy....Delightful... :-)
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Date: 10/29/2013 10:39:00 PM
This is a very nice tribute. I don't know her. I think I'll check her out. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:12:00 PM
What a wonderful tribute you have written for the lovely Yasmin Debbie. I am sure she will be touched by it.
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Date: 10/29/2013 8:00:00 PM
this is lovely Debbie...am sure she will love this one :) hugs
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Date: 10/29/2013 3:48:00 PM
wow,this is so sweet what you have said to this sweet woman and her kids. I wish you could do it for her. She so deserves it. Wonderful poem. Loved the third stanza, first line and last words of it.
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