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Jasmine Dreams

Oh, I’m going to meet you
my fair Yasmin	I’ll hug you, 'till you laugh

Oh, I’d want to meet you  in mad Mumbai,
beneath the orange sky

If I could I bring with me    a ticket or three
I’d wrap you up, the kids in tow 
I’d take you home with me.

We’d turn our backs on the city life   on men
we’d find a place where we’d be safe
a place		where writers blend
beneath a sky of blue

We women four would grow and grow
we’d be most famous	you’d see
cause there’s nothing to compare
to show I care, than to have you  here

Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 12/2/2013 6:49:00 PM
    A lovely poem and a nice tribute to Yasmin! It would be great if we could all meet each other, someday. Another terrific poem by you, Debbie!

  1. Date: 11/17/2013 7:00:00 PM
    gosh, you should have entered this one in my little contest I just judged. It would have worked! yes, Debs, to the question you just asked me.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 8:16:00 PM
    A caring beautiful win...congratulations

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 11:00:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 9:16:00 PM
    Congrats on your Meeting The Soup poets win........ LOVE SKAT

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 11:33:00 PM
    love the win DG..... Linda

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 6:28:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Debbie. I read underneath that she cried when reading it. Hats off to you for touching her heart. Well done, my friend. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 4:51:00 AM
    Ahh!! Thanks for the visit to my page and the lovely thoughts left there..I haven't looked at the winners' list yet..This work shows generousity of spirit on your part..Sara

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 2:00:00 AM
    (Informally Reviewed) Well written.Enjoyed the whole plot and Scheme. A Beautiful piece of poetry, written magnificently and sublimely with flowing thoughts of inspiration and imagination.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 7:38:00 PM
    such an awesome poem. congrats, Debs.

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 2:24:00 PM
    very sweet...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 1:29:00 PM
    Debbie, this is so encouraging! Congrats on your win! Nice to meet you my Souper-Friend! Bless you always! :-) - Den

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 12:37:00 PM
    I knew she would love this one...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 11:28:00 AM
    A delightful win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 10:31:00 AM
    What an endearing poem of friendship!! Love this warm invitation to Yasmin.....this must have encouraged her want to begin packing her suitcase!!

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 9:38:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, debbie

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 2:41:00 AM
    I love it when you reveal that part of your heart..that soft tender caring part..Its so beautiful and Yas deserves it..Tnks for stopping vy sweet lady

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:24:00 PM
    Yasmin must be smiling beneath the orange sky in Mumbai. Great tribute...I guess she is a poet too! Friend, JM

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 8:06:00 AM
    Lovely, Debbie....So sweet and full of love and empathy....Delightful... :-)

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:39:00 PM
    This is a very nice tribute. I don't know her. I think I'll check her out. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla