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I know a girl named Jasmin
And I want to tell her 
How sweet she has been 

These few years that 
I've admired her 
For the things she said 
That inspired her 

A moth too close to 
The flames at times 
Never foolish or vain 
Or full of lies 

I respect her for not 
Falling for my lines 
But even so we've had 
Our good and bad times 

At times I can tell I have a 
Piece of her heart 
I'll always be looking 
For that tiny spark 

But this in return 
I secretly give 
A place in my heart 
Where she will always live

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  1. Date: 7/16/2013 1:53:00 AM
    Nice romantic and sweet...Hearts have many chambers....why not keep a place for her there. Thank for your visit...

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:42:00 AM
    this is a cute poem. And as for martinis. I doubt I would like the taste. What about wine?Would that do the trick?

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 4:49:00 PM
    Hi Situation, this is lovely, pretty like the title. it is nice to give and keep others in your heart...Linda

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 3:26:00 PM
    I can feel there is quite a bit of emotion in this it strikes a note with human fallibilty and aspiration tinged with tegret..'

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 11:08:00 AM
    Ahhh!!! I feel the romance in this one..Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..I like the Pantoum because of its repeat lines but I agree it is structured and sometimes not so easy to write..Sara